Fallowstar ((WindClan))

[roversydneygirl]

FALLOWSTAR

"Fox-red pelt with black stripes and white spots."

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Gender:Tom
Age:49 moons.
Clan:WindClan
Position:Leader

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Physical Description:Fallowstar has a fox-red pelt with light white spots and abnormally small light blue eyes. His white spots are everywhere on his body, but you still see more red than white. Fallowstar's light blue eyes are slightly different shades, his left eye being more dark. He also has a few black stripes. These can be found on his forehead and back, that's it. Small, shorthair-like tail, but medium-sized haired pelt.
Personality Description: Fallowstar is a sweet, handsome, WindClan leader, who tries his best to make peace between the clans, even though everything is messed up. He is shy, though, but loves helping his clanmates. As a kit, he was always the one to shy away from their games and instead use his favorite sense - smell - to seek out things of nature inside the camp. Fallowstar's original dream was to be a medicine cat, but he is still happy as a leader, because he loves helping the clan out.

sweet;; Fallowstar received his sweet gene from his father, who was one of the nicest cats Fallowstar knew. When there once was a quarrel between a few clans Fallowstar's dad was one of the few cats who opposed of the fighting. While Fallowstar isn't always confident enough to speak his peace-fulfilling ideas, he almost always has one.

handsome;; Although there is no standards for being handsome, Fallowstar is generally good looking. He previously wanted a mate, but he is good for now --- even though some she-cats are interested in him, he chooses to keep single, for personal reasons.

shy;; Fallowstar's shy, and he knows it's one of the worst traits a leader can have. This came from not really being introduced to any other cats as a kit. He kept to himself, and not having any siblings, had no real reasons to make friends. Had he known he would have had such an important job when he got older, he defiantly would have made more friends. As an apprentice, he began to meet cats and as a warrior began to make friends. He is still a little cautious, and is the usually the last to speak at a gathering.

helpful;; This trait also came from his father, but some of his mother, too. When Fallowstar's mother's first litter died, she took in a foster kit, and would often tell Fallowstar the stories of her and the kit. Hearing all the stories of being nice and helpful, and from getting many lessons on manners, Fallowstar was always sure to be kind and helpful.

wanting to be a medicine cat;; Fallowstar had always just wanted to be a medicine cat. He had always liked the smell of the den, feel of herbs under his paws, and prickle of the floor on the den. Fallowstar knew he couldn't ever be a medicine cat --- everyone always said that he was too good at fighting and his parents expected him to be "the best warrior ever" --- but he still likes going there now, and visiting the medicine cat.

History:It is believed that Fallowstar was related to the original deputy of WindClan, though it is not certain. Fallowstar's family was very loyal to the clan but Fallowstar's mother was originally a kittypet. Fallowstar has had a few cats intrested in him, but he doesn't have a crush, and partially hopes he doesn't ever need to get a mate --- is afraid it would distract him from his duties, kinda like a medicine cat. Fallowstar hasn't had many friends until now, but the ones he has had for awhile, he would die for.

related to the original deputy;; Fallowstar has been told by StarClan they think he was related to the original deputy, but no one knows for sure. If it's true, Fallowstar would be very proud, but wouldn't tell anyone. If it's not true, Fallowstar thinks it wouldn't really matter otherwise.

family was very loyal;; Fallowstar's family grew up in families that were also very loyal, so this gene had been passed down, basically through all family members. While Fallowstar must be loyal as well, he chooses not to show it that much --- he is already quite soft when it comes to dealing with other clans.

mother was originally a kittypet;; At the same time the clans were settling down even further, and the fourth leader was reigning, Fallowstar's mother was being born in a Twoleg nest not far from WindClan's territory. She stumbled upon the cats one day, while out looking for mice. The new found warrior never went back to the kittypet life, realizing that wild life suited her much better. She fit in well and met Fallowstar's father, and then came young Fallowkit.

doesn't have a crush;; From initially wanting to be a medicine cat, to thinking there was too much to do as a clan leader, Fallowstar hasn't really ever been into she-cats. Call him crazy, there are many beautiful cats in WindClan, but he honestly doesn't need a mate...or so he thinks.

hopes he doesn't need a mate;; Fallowstar doesn't know he will eventually need a mate (he will get one later) to help him get by his emotional problems, but right now he thinks he's fine. What he doesn't know is that many quarrels are hard to get by without a partner to his side.

hasn't had many friends until now;; Being shy is definitely a very bad trait to have as a leader, and this is where the lack of friends came in. Fallowstar tries to introduce himself and make it know he wants friends, but it's hard when his first impressions on others are always awkward. He hopes that being a leader will help his friendships and ties with others greatly.

RP Sample: Fallowkit padded along the snowy dirt path, and sat down to look at the beautiful moon that lined with the sun. This wondrous vision happened only once a year, and Fallowkit loved it.

The frigid winds that surrounded him from the hills lapped his fur forward, and he lifted the weight from his paws so the irregularly strong breeze pushed him down the hill, under the bright, stary night. Fallowkit laughed and pulled himself to his paws, shaking the snow off of his pelt.

Alright, no more fun. This happens once every 12 moons! You've waited forever for this, Fallowkit thought to himself, sitting down on the hill and blinking up at the moon and sun. The brilliant light shot onto his coat and made it shine silver. The light tickled him and he smiled. "Thank you, StarClan."

The Winter Solstice was Fallowkit's favorite time of year. It was just beautiful what StarClan could send to the good ones on land. Fallowkit always was a polite and kind little boy when Winter came, to make sure StarClan brought him the solstice. Not that he got many cats around these parts. Fallowkit was afraid of other cats, actually, and had never friends.
Getting tired, Fallowkit laid down and rolled in the snow to freeze himself up. He laughed at the sight of his pelt coated white, the bright red and white spots covered up. Fallowkit bent down to lick the snow off of his freezing coat, purring loud.
I could get used to this... The tips of his lips curved up and he curled up for sleep.

(this was from another website, where the same cat was a kit)

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Name:Sydney
Age: 27
Current Characters: Not yet, but I might make more x3
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[Miu]

I love your bio, but three things need to be fixed.

1) Although your personality is good, being handsome isn't a personality trait. You can replace it with something else or just remove it.

2) In your history please tell us what happens from kithood to now. Don't just name certain things like you did.

3) Sorry but all RP samples have to be for this specific character and not from another site.