How To Grade An Application

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You can use this sweet little tut thingy to grade your own application. Staff will be using this too to see if your bio can be accepted or denied.

Name:

The name follow these simple rules.
Kits names must end in Kit, unless they're kittypets, rogues, or loners. Apprentices names end in Paw, and leaders end in Star. All the cats names can be about their personality, something in nature, or something physical. It cannot be something that cat's don't know about, such as bullets, hammers, vehicles, etc. Most cats don't know what pumas or mountain lions or lynxs are. They come up with other names for them.

Ages:

Kits cannot be any older than six moons. You cannot become an apprentice any younger than six moons either. Apprentices are usually ages six moons to 12-15 moons. Warriors are usually around 12 moons (the youngest) until they die or given the elder status, at around 72 moons. Note that leaders aren't usually made such until they're around 25 means because they have to train an apprentice first and that takes another 6-9 months.

Personality:

The personality has to be descriptive. If you describe a positive trait you should be able to add a negative one as well. They can't be perfect but they can't be a depressed emo kitty either. For example if your cat is cheerful all the time make them have a negative attribute such as being annoyed by elders. Something negative, doesn't have to be big like wanting to destroy the world. Delve into their personalities because hopefully you'll be rping these characters for a long time.

Physical:

When you describe what they look like describe everything. Put in what color their coat is, if its long, short, or even bald. If they have any markings tell us all about them. Tell us how big they are, even the size of the paws if you want. We want to be able to picture them and the more description you give, the more we'll be able to do just that.

History:

The history is one of the most important areas. We get to see where your character comes from. Tell us from their kithood all the way to presence. Don't leave any detail to chance. No matter how boring it seems to you put it anyways. Tell us how she came to have her personality. For example a character may be extremely determined and bull-headed because their parents wouldn't accept anything less than perfect. Describe at least one event in each stage of life (kit, apprentice, and warriorhood).

Please also note that the roleplay sample is only needed for your first character. It must be about the character you're applying for.